This week we are working hard to write descriptive personal stories. A descriptive story is full of details that make the story more interesting for the reader. Our current read aloud, Roxie and the Hooligans, is incredibly descriptive! We can see Roxie’s big, round, sugar bowl ears! We can hear the hooligans as they laugh because the author, Phyllis Reynolds Naylor, tells us that they sound just like crows, mice, and donkeys!
Check out Antwan’s personal story below. He puts in so many exciting details that make it easy to picture the action as you read!
What is your favorite part of his story so far?
Good job Antwan (:
I really enjoyed the reading this week, Roxie is brave girl!!
I love your story Ixell
Good job lexll with your story
what Maryam said I love your story too!!!!!!! and what a wornderful idea