Antwan did a nice job using dialogue in his “From the heart” story about the day his brother Takyi was born. He wrote:

I shouted so loudly. I said, “Oh my gosh he’s so sweet!”

When he added in that dialogue to his story it made it come alive to the reader! I feel like I’m there seeing Takyi for the first time. What a special story.

Thank you for sharing with us Antwan!