Antwan completed his story today! He used the different the different strategies we discussed in our writing mini-lessons:

1. Brainstorm and plan before jumping into writing.

2. Start your story by grabbing the reader’s attention!

3. Add in juicy details as you stretch out the action in the middle of the story.

4. End your story with feeling! Make your reader remember your words!

Antwan has not begun editing and revising his work yet so this is his “Sloppy Copy.” Leave Antwan a positive comment or some sweet advice. 🙂